Comments on: Atalanta’s Quest, Part One http://www.hologramthoughts.com/2007/12/04/atalantas-quest-part-one/ Because Ideas Last Forever Thu, 04 Mar 2010 03:20:48 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Atalanta’s Quest, Part Two | Hologram Thoughts http://www.hologramthoughts.com/2007/12/04/atalantas-quest-part-one/comment-page-1/#comment-138 Atalanta’s Quest, Part Two | Hologram Thoughts Fri, 06 Jun 2008 21:31:22 +0000 http://www.hologramthoughts.com/2007/12/04/atalantas-quest-part-one/#comment-138 [...] (This is part two in a three part story line. Atalanta’s Quest Part One is here.) [...] [...] (This is part two in a three part story line. Atalanta’s Quest Part One is here.) [...]

]]> By: Phoenix Rising http://www.hologramthoughts.com/2007/12/04/atalantas-quest-part-one/comment-page-1/#comment-108 Phoenix Rising Thu, 06 Dec 2007 22:28:23 +0000 http://www.hologramthoughts.com/2007/12/04/atalantas-quest-part-one/#comment-108 I love the way you capture the intensity of the character's emotional responses... "Her breath was caught within her lungs; burning for release" How you describe the rich environment just draws you into the story and makes you eager for more... The floor, walls and pillars were all made of the same alabaster marble. There were lamps hung from the ceiling and the flames danced with the light breeze that moved past her skin I think this is one of my faves but I am prone to like mythology based stories.. so you had me at hello...LOL.. Great piece as usual.. Matthew. I love the way you capture the intensity of the character’s emotional responses…

“Her breath was caught within her lungs; burning for release”

How you describe the rich environment just draws you into the story and makes you eager for more…

The floor, walls and pillars were all made of the same alabaster marble. There were lamps hung from the ceiling and the flames danced with the light breeze that moved past her skin

I think this is one of my faves but I am prone to like mythology based stories.. so you had me at hello…LOL..

Great piece as usual.. Matthew.

]]> By: Laurie http://www.hologramthoughts.com/2007/12/04/atalantas-quest-part-one/comment-page-1/#comment-107 Laurie Wed, 05 Dec 2007 17:08:39 +0000 http://www.hologramthoughts.com/2007/12/04/atalantas-quest-part-one/#comment-107 This is beautifully written and I thank you for sharing it with me. I look forward to reading more! This is beautifully written and I thank you for sharing it with me.
I look forward to reading more!

]]> By: ashley http://www.hologramthoughts.com/2007/12/04/atalantas-quest-part-one/comment-page-1/#comment-106 ashley Tue, 04 Dec 2007 16:47:20 +0000 http://www.hologramthoughts.com/2007/12/04/atalantas-quest-part-one/#comment-106 i'm not sure what to think, sometimes you are too deep for me! i love how you make me think and wonder. i’m not sure what to think, sometimes you are too deep for me! i love how you make me think and wonder.

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