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Tree, Mountain, Valley and Cloud

Tree stood upon the summit of Mountain for untold eons, watching Valley below bloom to life every spring and return to a peaceful sleep winter after winter. Tree loved Valley as a parent loves his child, having been a small twig when Valley was born from Mountain’s side. In many ways Tree cared for Valley more than Mountain ever had.

Valley, lush and green with a steady flow racing through River, watched Mountain and smiled up to Tree as always. Valley had much energy right now, with many animals and even some humans within her boundaries. Those energies mixed and swirled with Valley, to form a kind and compassionate aura that even high on Mountain, Tree could feel deep within his roots.

As Sun slid down behind Mountain the shadows began to fill Valley, and one by one fires were lit along the lazy shore of River. Tree, seeing the last rays of Sun for the night, whispered his calming mantra to the evening energies, and then looked into Sky hoping to see Moon and Cloud above.

Moon, only a sliver of white against a background of shining stars, smiled down upon the world below. Her old friend Tree, regal as always, shimmered of love and light high upon Mountain.

Tree looked form horizon to horizon for Cloud. Stars twinkled and Moon beamed, but Cloud was nowhere to be seen.  Tree looked to Mountain and asked if Mountain knew where Cloud may be tonight, but Mountain had not seen Cloud for days. Tree asked Valley if Cloud had been low to the ground, hugging River as sometimes happens in early morning hours. Valley had not seen Cloud, nor had River.

Tree looked back to Moon and asked again, knowing that Moon could see further than even River, and River ran for thousands of miles from the High North to the Dry South. Moon said that she could feel Cloud, but could not see her tonight.

Tree, worried for his love closed his mind to the energies around him and reached out to Cloud with all that he was. From tip of root buried deep within Mountain, almost to Valley below, to the highest leaf upon the lithest branch in the Sky above, he called out to Cloud.

Memory and soul combined to call out, no ear could hear this plea, no throat could make this sound, but Cloud could feel it deep within her, as if her heart had awoken. She stirred and coalesced from the nothingness that she had become. Drop by drop she called the moisture to herself in the Sky above Tree until she hung there between Tree, Sky and Moon.

“Ah, there you are, my dear.” Tree thought to Cloud.

“I was with you all the while, in you, around you, for you.” Cloud thought back to Tree with love and appreciation.

Tree smiled up at Cloud, Sky and Moon and knowing that Mountain, Valley and River below were well, he slept at peace.

Author’s note: A lovely sister piece to mine is Shore, Wave and Moon by Susan Fujiki. We chatted about my story and she mentioned that she would like to write something in this vein, she is amazing. Please read it and comment on her site.

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12 Comments

  1. 1111 1111

    It is the intent that speaks louder than words.

  2. Paula Paula

    So beautiful. You have a true gift. I yearned to be the tree…did the rain inspire you? A beautiful depiction of nature.

  3. This is a theme which I come back to time and again… The rains today surely brought it back to me.

  4. Matt –
    I admire your writing and point of view always. As for seeing Agni, I am pretty much disposed to see Agni everywhere, so the answer is Yes!
    Thank you to this poetic journey.
    Wayne

  5. I spent a lot of summers in, and near, the Himalayas. Playing in rivers, looking at valleys, hanging out in meadows.

    Yes, I was often that ‘tree’. Seeking the ‘cloud’ of love.

    Your post encapsulates all those memories and takes me back home. To a place inside my heart.

  6. SufiHeart SufiHeart

    Amazing! love it!
    descriptive and def evokes something within me as well.

    🙂

  7. GetYourZen GetYourZen

    We are all connected, even as Cloud is in all things. I am reminded of that tonight – with our power out, we visited outside with neighbors we don’t see often enough. Now we sit inside with doors and windows open, and I can hear the crickets, neighboring dogs and children playing. It is good to be reminded of how close we really are.

  8. Beautiful .. we are ONE with Tree, Mountain, Valley and Cloud
    ..keep writing and speaking your heart! It is beautiful indeed!

  9. Thank you all, your comments are priceless. Namaste.

  10. Cecilia Cecilia

    Very nice♥

  11. Dear Matt,
    There is so much love here. “I was with you all the while, in you, around you, for you.” May we see with the heart. Beautiful.

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